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Thursday 26 May 2011

What am I?

I am one of the pillars the earth needs to survive. I am invisible. I don’t pollute the atmosphere. There is one tonne of me on your shoulders. I am made up of two different molecules. I can cause disasters by moving. I can make electricity. Trees help clean me. I help people dry there clothes. I help animals smell there food by caring it from place to place. I help plants scatter their seeds.

3 comments:

Renee :) said...

Hi Eseki,

I like your poem. I think you are air! You have taught me some things about air that I didn't know.

My only other comment is to remember that 'there' is when you are talking about 'it's over there'. When you are talking about something that belongs to a group of people or things, you use 'their', as in 'I help plants scatter their seeds'.

I like your blog so far, keep up the good work!

Renee :)

Mrs R. Moopanar said...

Well done Eseki on your excellent writing. You had some interesting facts about air.

Unknown said...

I am enjoying following your new blog Eseki. Keep up the great work.

Mrs Burt

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